Rhythm 1

This is my first day critiquing so here it goes. The assignment was to create an image using rhythm, where the lines are the same direction and quality, but vary only in thickness and distance between another. In this piece primarily the lines are the same size, in the identical direction, mostly the same spacing and the thickness doesn't vary to much. When looking at it closely there is an illusion of  lines in musical motion. I wanted to capture the movement of rhythm in music and I think I was some what successful.  In general I'm happy with the way it turned out  and I take pleasure in looking at it and seeing multiple different depictions.